Month: December 2016

“The ice was here,the ice was there,the Ice was all round:it cracked and growled,and roared and howled,like noises in a swound.”

The words in red represent repetition and it is describing that the ice goes on miles away.

The words in green show iambic meter by creating Rythm and flow in the writing by having the right choice of words.

The words underlined show rhyme keeping consistency in the writing.

“The fair breeze blew,the white foam flew,the furrow followed free:we were the first that ever burst into that silent sea.”

The words highlighted in blue are examples of alliteration using some aspects of iambic meter.

1. Sailing across the sea,the mast stood tall and proud
   carrying the sail.In the distance,a figure appeared to be hollo.Finally it was raining we were so thirsty that we collected the dew off of the edges in the vessel.It began to hail and the prow of the ship became faded.Suddenly,I felt a heavy pang.As I was in some pain,I perched along the side of the boat.Bang! the sailor dropped dead,one of the crew members grabbed a shroud and it created a dismal mood.